Next time, consider not having a voice over I feel that this distracts from the tone you have set within this piece and lacks the professionalism you would expect to see. You also need to have a J or and L cut, I don't see evidence of this and another graphic with facts. Your lighting and choice of setting are fantastic and the website link at the end is perfect. You could include a graphic for Your-Identity at the start of your advert.
Next time, consider not having a voice over I feel that this distracts from the tone you have set within this piece and lacks the professionalism you would expect to see. You also need to have a J or and L cut, I don't see evidence of this and another graphic with facts. Your lighting and choice of setting are fantastic and the website link at the end is perfect. You could include a graphic for Your-Identity at the start of your advert.
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