• Like the idea of Sci-Fi based but worried it might be not suitable for everyone.
• Good detail in your pitch.
• Excellent flat plan.
• He included information about most topics and gave information for each.
• He also included a flat plan to help visualise his magazine.
• The colour scheme is a bit dull.
• Doesn't have many pictures.
• Has a lot of key information.
• Going through this pitch, it did a good job of getting the idea across to people and conceiving an original idea, although perhaps you could be limited by your set genre.
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